Happy New Year, Des. Just wondering when you are planning to do the revisions on the notes. thanks, Marge
PATE CHAUD
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17 can you check through footage to see if we have a tight shot of just the meats? And then a Cu of just spices to run under “a collection of spices” (just saw some tight shots of meats around 4:11 in timeline if anything is usable there; same with CU of spices around 5:38)
<<<:10, :16, :21 DONE -dm
:45 Removing skin from 3 duck breasts: can you create a video montage of him removing the duck fat from all 3 duck breasts to run under the existing audio? At the end, try to include a CU of him laying the 3rd duck breast on the pile. If it exists, you can add another audio line.
>>>:43 DONE -dm
4:52 nice montage on grinding. Can you see if there is one more Cu of him cutting a big chunk of meat on cutting board?
>>>4:56 DONE -dm
5:27 after this wider shot, can you work in a CU of the finished, ground meats in the bowl if it exists?
>>>No CU of finished ground meats until hk moves the bowl. CU of bowl being scraped. -dm
5:37 -- delete if you can “ once I have that, and it comes now to the pate chaud”
>>>5:37 DONE -dm
6:10 – like to go back to HK on WS somewhere in here – maybe for addition of pepper and then see him crack the eggs into the bowl
>>>6:05 back to WS for pepper. Added hk talking point. Added back in cracking of eggs. -dm
6:15 – Instead of doing a TL on the mixing of the stuffing, could you put together a video montage that shows more stages of the mixing? Keep the same audio or add any interesting points he makes.
>>>6:16 I added in 2 more mixing stages and the only audio that was originally cut out. No extra hk talking points here. -dm
8:15 delete “so once I have that”
>>>8:43 DONE -dm
8:29 I think we can lose the TL effect and just do a straight cut
>>>8:59 DONE -dm
8:38 end CU here
>>>9:07 shortened this CU here. It was covering up camera movement on hk. -dm
12:12 – If you can eliminate this quick cut to a WS (feels jumpy going back and forth)
>>>12:41 WS eliminated -dm
12:45 can you eliminate this CU of the dough w/ egg wash here and go right to cookie cutters CU? Actually not sure I really like CU of cookie cutters since his audio doesn’t explain them. I think we can just wait till he starts using them and says what they are. I don’t suppose we have a shot of him picking them up and going over to dough.
>>>13:12 eliminated CU of dough w/ egg wash. Moved cookie cutter CU in it’s place. No CU found of cookie cutters being picked up. Wide shot of fumbling with cutters put back in. -dm
14:03 -- try cutting out the few seconds before this point (he turns the tray and says “once we are here”) start with “you can use a little fork>..””
>>>14:33 DONE -dm
Jan 2 -- all changes are OK; no more --
recipes finished.