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1. Morning at home
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I get out of bed and check for messages I never have.
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I find my wife in the kitchen trying to make bread
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My wife gets mad and shouts at me. I decide to go to the gym.
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I admire everyone at the gym the way my wife admires things on TV.
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I try to make friends, but I end up ticking off the women next to me
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I get kicked out of the gym
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Meanwhile, my wife has just made the perfect batch of bread, which I eat while we watch Food Network.
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2. Gym
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3. Evening at home
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Every morning I check my phone, but I never have any messages. No one responds to my comments on FB or retweets what I post. I am lonely.
Me
I try to lose weight but all I lose is friends
lonely
There's nothing social about my media.
She's making a mess, and she's very frustrated.
My Wife
Me
My wife makes bread
watches a lot of Food Network
Television
Kitchen
Things never turn out like like they do on TV. We need better channels.
Me
My Wife
I try to lose weight but all I lose is friends
My wife makes bread
gets frustrated easily, needs me out of the house
Bread
Kitchen
Me
I try to lose weight but all I lose is friends
aging, a little overweight, insecure, wearing work out clothes
Incline bench
Gym
Friends at the gym
Me
I try to lose weight but all I lose is friends
obnoxious, talk among themselves and laugh a lot, get quiet when I set up next to them, seem self-conscious, but are really just creeped out by me
Gym
Gym owner
Friends at the gym
Me
I try to lose weight but all I lose is friends
lacks self-awareness
Gym
My Wife
Me
My wife makes bread
Television
Bread
Kitchen
If you put Heidi Klum in one box and sourdough in another, the smell alone would tell me which to choose., That souffle looks amazing. I bet I could do that.
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